Update formula copy (#1343)

* Update formula copy

* Remove plural on threshold
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@ -43,7 +43,8 @@ export const FORMULA = {
INTRO: <FormattedMessage
id={'methodology.page.formula.intro'}
defaultMessage={`
Under the current formula, a census tract will be {identifiedDis} in one or more categories of criteria:
Under the current formula, a census tract will be identified as disadvantaged in one or more
categories of criteria:
`}
description={'methodology page introducing the formula'}
values={{
@ -53,8 +54,7 @@ export const FORMULA = {
IF: <FormattedMessage
id={'methodology.page.formula.first'}
defaultMessage={ `
{if} the tract is above the thresholds for one or more environmental, climate, health or
socioeconomic burden indicators
{if} the tract is above the threshold for one or more environmental or climate indicators
`}
description={'the first part of the formula used in the methodology'}
values= {{
@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ export const FORMULA = {
AND: <FormattedMessage
id={'methodology.page.formula.second'}
defaultMessage={ `
{and} the tract is above the thresholds for both socioeconomic indicators
{and} the tract is above the threshold for the socioeconomic indicators
`}
description={'the second part of the formula used in the methodology'}
values= {{