From d1d62315ffe80e4aceadf4de15e1a574bfb6e512 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Vim <86254807+vim-usds@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Fri, 25 Feb 2022 15:48:08 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Update formula copy (#1343)

* Update formula copy

* Remove plural on threshold
---
 .../__snapshots__/MethodologyFormula.test.tsx.snap   | 12 ++++--------
 client/src/data/copy/methodology.tsx                 |  8 ++++----
 .../pages/__snapshots__/methodology.test.tsx.snap    | 12 ++++--------
 3 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 20 deletions(-)

diff --git a/client/src/components/MethodologyFormula/__snapshots__/MethodologyFormula.test.tsx.snap b/client/src/components/MethodologyFormula/__snapshots__/MethodologyFormula.test.tsx.snap
index e62e9033..5323388a 100644
--- a/client/src/components/MethodologyFormula/__snapshots__/MethodologyFormula.test.tsx.snap
+++ b/client/src/components/MethodologyFormula/__snapshots__/MethodologyFormula.test.tsx.snap
@@ -5,11 +5,8 @@ exports[`rendering of the MethodologyFormula checks if component renders 1`] = `
   <section>
     <p>
       
-      Under the current formula, a census tract will be 
-      <strong>
-        identified as disadvantaged
-      </strong>
-       in one or more categories of criteria: 
+      Under the current formula, a census tract will be identified as disadvantaged in one or more 
+      categories of criteria: 
     
     </p>
     <p>
@@ -18,8 +15,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the MethodologyFormula checks if component renders 1`] = `
       <span>
         IF
       </span>
-       the tract is above the thresholds for one or more environmental, climate, health or 
-      socioeconomic burden indicators
+       the tract is above the threshold for one or more environmental or climate indicators
       
     </p>
     <p>
@@ -28,7 +24,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the MethodologyFormula checks if component renders 1`] = `
       <span>
         AND
       </span>
-       the tract is above the thresholds for both socioeconomic indicators
+       the tract is above the threshold for the socioeconomic indicators
     
     </p>
   </section>
diff --git a/client/src/data/copy/methodology.tsx b/client/src/data/copy/methodology.tsx
index 796f4f53..1b947c06 100644
--- a/client/src/data/copy/methodology.tsx
+++ b/client/src/data/copy/methodology.tsx
@@ -43,7 +43,8 @@ export const FORMULA = {
   INTRO: <FormattedMessage
     id={'methodology.page.formula.intro'}
     defaultMessage={`
-      Under the current formula, a census tract will be {identifiedDis} in one or more categories of criteria: 
+      Under the current formula, a census tract will be identified as disadvantaged in one or more 
+      categories of criteria: 
     `}
     description={'methodology page introducing the formula'}
     values={{
@@ -53,8 +54,7 @@ export const FORMULA = {
   IF: <FormattedMessage
     id={'methodology.page.formula.first'}
     defaultMessage={ `
-      {if} the tract is above the thresholds for one or more environmental, climate, health or 
-      socioeconomic burden indicators
+      {if} the tract is above the threshold for one or more environmental or climate indicators
       `}
     description={'the first part of the formula used in the methodology'}
     values= {{
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ export const FORMULA = {
   AND: <FormattedMessage
     id={'methodology.page.formula.second'}
     defaultMessage={ `
-      {and} the tract is above the thresholds for both socioeconomic indicators
+      {and} the tract is above the threshold for the socioeconomic indicators
     `}
     description={'the second part of the formula used in the methodology'}
     values= {{
diff --git a/client/src/pages/__snapshots__/methodology.test.tsx.snap b/client/src/pages/__snapshots__/methodology.test.tsx.snap
index 966f50aa..c285cd5b 100644
--- a/client/src/pages/__snapshots__/methodology.test.tsx.snap
+++ b/client/src/pages/__snapshots__/methodology.test.tsx.snap
@@ -302,11 +302,8 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
           <section>
             <p>
               
-      Under the current formula, a census tract will be 
-              <strong>
-                identified as disadvantaged
-              </strong>
-               in one or more categories of criteria: 
+      Under the current formula, a census tract will be identified as disadvantaged in one or more 
+      categories of criteria: 
     
             </p>
             <p>
@@ -315,8 +312,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
               <span>
                 IF
               </span>
-               the tract is above the thresholds for one or more environmental, climate, health or 
-      socioeconomic burden indicators
+               the tract is above the threshold for one or more environmental or climate indicators
       
             </p>
             <p>
@@ -325,7 +321,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
               <span>
                 AND
               </span>
-               the tract is above the thresholds for both socioeconomic indicators
+               the tract is above the threshold for the socioeconomic indicators
     
             </p>
           </section>