Update formula copy (#1343)

* Update formula copy

* Remove plural on threshold
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@ -5,11 +5,8 @@ exports[`rendering of the MethodologyFormula checks if component renders 1`] = `
<section>
<p>
Under the current formula, a census tract will be
<strong>
identified as disadvantaged
</strong>
in one or more categories of criteria:
Under the current formula, a census tract will be identified as disadvantaged in one or more
categories of criteria:
</p>
<p>
@ -18,8 +15,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the MethodologyFormula checks if component renders 1`] = `
<span>
IF
</span>
the tract is above the thresholds for one or more environmental, climate, health or
socioeconomic burden indicators
the tract is above the threshold for one or more environmental or climate indicators
</p>
<p>
@ -28,7 +24,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the MethodologyFormula checks if component renders 1`] = `
<span>
AND
</span>
the tract is above the thresholds for both socioeconomic indicators
the tract is above the threshold for the socioeconomic indicators
</p>
</section>

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@ -43,7 +43,8 @@ export const FORMULA = {
INTRO: <FormattedMessage
id={'methodology.page.formula.intro'}
defaultMessage={`
Under the current formula, a census tract will be {identifiedDis} in one or more categories of criteria:
Under the current formula, a census tract will be identified as disadvantaged in one or more
categories of criteria:
`}
description={'methodology page introducing the formula'}
values={{
@ -53,8 +54,7 @@ export const FORMULA = {
IF: <FormattedMessage
id={'methodology.page.formula.first'}
defaultMessage={ `
{if} the tract is above the thresholds for one or more environmental, climate, health or
socioeconomic burden indicators
{if} the tract is above the threshold for one or more environmental or climate indicators
`}
description={'the first part of the formula used in the methodology'}
values= {{
@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ export const FORMULA = {
AND: <FormattedMessage
id={'methodology.page.formula.second'}
defaultMessage={ `
{and} the tract is above the thresholds for both socioeconomic indicators
{and} the tract is above the threshold for the socioeconomic indicators
`}
description={'the second part of the formula used in the methodology'}
values= {{

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@ -302,11 +302,8 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
<section>
<p>
Under the current formula, a census tract will be
<strong>
identified as disadvantaged
</strong>
in one or more categories of criteria:
Under the current formula, a census tract will be identified as disadvantaged in one or more
categories of criteria:
</p>
<p>
@ -315,8 +312,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
<span>
IF
</span>
the tract is above the thresholds for one or more environmental, climate, health or
socioeconomic burden indicators
the tract is above the threshold for one or more environmental or climate indicators
</p>
<p>
@ -325,7 +321,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
<span>
AND
</span>
the tract is above the thresholds for both socioeconomic indicators
the tract is above the threshold for the socioeconomic indicators
</p>
</section>