From e48ab86b852dfa42686d96a0de779b9ef546a741 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Vim <86254807+vim-usds@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 17 Feb 2022 18:50:30 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Update copy from CEQ (#1296)

* Update copy

- updates from CEQ
- meth page
- side panel pages
- low median income
- update snapshots

* QA udpates
---
 .../src/components/AreaDetail/AreaDetail.tsx  |  26 ++--
 .../__snapshots__/areaDetail.test.tsx.snap    | 134 ++++++++----------
 .../__snapshots__/Categories.test.tsx.snap    |  74 +++++-----
 .../__snapshots__/CategoryCard.test.tsx.snap  |   8 +-
 .../datasetContainer.test.tsx.snap            |  35 +++--
 .../__snapshots__/howYouCanHelp.test.tsx.snap |  12 +-
 .../MethodologyFormula.test.tsx.snap          |   5 +-
 client/src/data/constants.tsx                 |   2 +
 client/src/data/copy/about.tsx                |   2 +-
 client/src/data/copy/explore.tsx              |  52 ++++---
 client/src/data/copy/methodology.tsx          |  63 ++++----
 .../pages/__snapshots__/index.test.tsx.snap   |   2 +-
 .../__snapshots__/methodology.test.tsx.snap   | 123 +++++++++-------
 13 files changed, 291 insertions(+), 247 deletions(-)

diff --git a/client/src/components/AreaDetail/AreaDetail.tsx b/client/src/components/AreaDetail/AreaDetail.tsx
index 66da3d3b..e64567b5 100644
--- a/client/src/components/AreaDetail/AreaDetail.tsx
+++ b/client/src/components/AreaDetail/AreaDetail.tsx
@@ -177,6 +177,14 @@ const AreaDetail = ({properties}:IAreaDetailProps) => {
     isDisadvagtaged: properties[constants.IS_FEDERAL_POVERTY_LEVEL_200] ?
       properties[constants.IS_FEDERAL_POVERTY_LEVEL_200] : null,
   };
+  // const higherEd:indicatorInfo = {
+  //   label: intl.formatMessage(EXPLORE_COPY.SIDE_PANEL_INDICATORS.HIGH_ED),
+  //   description: intl.formatMessage(EXPLORE_COPY.SIDE_PANEL_INDICATOR_DESCRIPTION.HIGH_ED),
+  //   value: properties[constants.HIGHER_ED_PERCENTILE] ?
+  //     properties[constants.HIGHER_ED_PERCENTILE] : null,
+  //   isDisadvagtaged: properties[constants.IS_HIGHER_ED_PERCENTILE] ?
+  //     properties[constants.IS_HIGHER_ED_PERCENTILE] : null,
+  // };
 
   const energyBurden:indicatorInfo = {
     label: intl.formatMessage(EXPLORE_COPY.SIDE_PANEL_INDICATORS.ENERGY_BURDEN),
@@ -303,20 +311,20 @@ const AreaDetail = ({properties}:IAreaDetailProps) => {
       properties[constants.IS_GTE_90_LOW_LIFE_EXP_AND_IS_LOW_INCOME] : null,
   };
 
+  const lingIso:indicatorInfo = {
+    label: intl.formatMessage(EXPLORE_COPY.SIDE_PANEL_INDICATORS.LING_ISO),
+    description: intl.formatMessage(EXPLORE_COPY.SIDE_PANEL_INDICATOR_DESCRIPTION.LING_ISO),
+    value: properties[constants.LINGUISTIC_ISOLATION_PROPERTY_PERCENTILE] ?
+    properties[constants.LINGUISTIC_ISOLATION_PROPERTY_PERCENTILE] : null,
+    isDisadvagtaged: properties[constants.IS_GTE_90_LINGUISITIC_ISO_AND_IS_LOW_INCOME] ?
+    properties[constants.IS_GTE_90_LINGUISITIC_ISO_AND_IS_LOW_INCOME] : null,
+  };
   const lowMedInc:indicatorInfo = {
     label: intl.formatMessage(EXPLORE_COPY.SIDE_PANEL_INDICATORS.LOW_MED_INC),
     description: intl.formatMessage(EXPLORE_COPY.SIDE_PANEL_INDICATOR_DESCRIPTION.LOW_MED_INCOME),
     value: getWorkForceIndicatorValue('lowMedInc'),
     isDisadvagtaged: getWorkForceIndicatorIsDisadv('lowMedInc'),
   };
-  const lingIso:indicatorInfo = {
-    label: intl.formatMessage(EXPLORE_COPY.SIDE_PANEL_INDICATORS.LING_ISO),
-    description: intl.formatMessage(EXPLORE_COPY.SIDE_PANEL_INDICATOR_DESCRIPTION.LING_ISO),
-    value: properties[constants.LINGUISTIC_ISOLATION_PROPERTY_PERCENTILE] ?
-      properties[constants.LINGUISTIC_ISOLATION_PROPERTY_PERCENTILE] : null,
-    isDisadvagtaged: properties[constants.IS_GTE_90_LINGUISITIC_ISO_AND_IS_LOW_INCOME] ?
-      properties[constants.IS_GTE_90_LINGUISITIC_ISO_AND_IS_LOW_INCOME] : null,
-  };
   const unemploy:indicatorInfo = {
     label: intl.formatMessage(EXPLORE_COPY.SIDE_PANEL_INDICATORS.UNEMPLOY),
     description: intl.formatMessage(EXPLORE_COPY.SIDE_PANEL_INDICATOR_DESCRIPTION.UNEMPLOY),
@@ -391,7 +399,7 @@ const AreaDetail = ({properties}:IAreaDetailProps) => {
     {
       id: 'work-dev',
       titleText: intl.formatMessage(EXPLORE_COPY.SIDE_PANEL_CATEGORY.WORK_DEV),
-      indicators: [lowMedInc, lingIso, unemploy, poverty, highSchool],
+      indicators: [lingIso, lowMedInc, , unemploy, poverty, highSchool],
       isDisadvagtaged: properties[constants.IS_WORKFORCE_FACTOR_DISADVANTAGED_M] ?
         properties[constants.IS_WORKFORCE_FACTOR_DISADVANTAGED_M] : null,
     },
diff --git a/client/src/components/AreaDetail/tests/__snapshots__/areaDetail.test.tsx.snap b/client/src/components/AreaDetail/tests/__snapshots__/areaDetail.test.tsx.snap
index 2869414c..259db9d6 100644
--- a/client/src/components/AreaDetail/tests/__snapshots__/areaDetail.test.tsx.snap
+++ b/client/src/components/AreaDetail/tests/__snapshots__/areaDetail.test.tsx.snap
@@ -159,8 +159,8 @@ exports[`rendering of the AreaDetail checks if indicators for ISLAND AREAS are p
               Poverty
               <div>
                 
-      Percent of a tract's population in households where the household income is at or below 
-      100% of the federal poverty level    
+      Percent of a tract's population in households where the household income is at or below 100% of 
+      the Federal poverty level   
     
               </div>
             </div>
@@ -179,11 +179,10 @@ exports[`rendering of the AreaDetail checks if indicators for ISLAND AREAS are p
         >
           <div>
             <div>
-              High school degree achievement rate
+              High school degree attainment rate
               <div>
                 
-      Percent of people ages 25 years or older whose education level is less than a high school diploma 
-      when higher ed enrollment rate is less than 20% in order to exclude areas with college and graduate students
+      Poportion of people ages 25 years or older whose education level is less than a high school diploma 
     
               </div>
             </div>
@@ -356,7 +355,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the AreaDetail checks if indicators for NATION is present
               Expected population loss rate
               <div>
                 
-      Rate relative to the population in fatalities and injuries resulting from natural hazards each year
+      Rate of fatalities and injuries resulting from natural hazards each year
     
               </div>
             </div>
@@ -376,8 +375,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the AreaDetail checks if indicators for NATION is present
               Low income
               <div>
                 
-      Household income is less than or equal to twice the federal poverty level when higher ed enrollment 
-      rate is less than 20% in order to exclude areas with college and graduate students
+      Household income is less than or equal to twice the federal poverty level 
     
               </div>
             </div>
@@ -431,7 +429,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the AreaDetail checks if indicators for NATION is present
         >
           <div>
             <div>
-              Energy cost burden
+              Energy burden
               <div>
                 Average annual energy costs divided by household income
               </div>
@@ -470,8 +468,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the AreaDetail checks if indicators for NATION is present
               Low income
               <div>
                 
-      Household income is less than or equal to twice the federal poverty level when higher ed enrollment 
-      rate is less than 20% in order to exclude areas with college and graduate students
+      Household income is less than or equal to twice the federal poverty level 
     
               </div>
             </div>
@@ -564,8 +561,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the AreaDetail checks if indicators for NATION is present
               Low income
               <div>
                 
-      Household income is less than or equal to twice the federal poverty level when higher ed enrollment 
-      rate is less than 20% in order to exclude areas with college and graduate students
+      Household income is less than or equal to twice the federal poverty level 
     
               </div>
             </div>
@@ -642,7 +638,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the AreaDetail checks if indicators for NATION is present
               Lead paint
               <div>
                 
-      Percent of pre-1960 housing when median home value at or below 90th percentile
+      Percentile of number of homes built before 1960 that are not among the most expensive
     
               </div>
             </div>
@@ -662,8 +658,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the AreaDetail checks if indicators for NATION is present
               Low income
               <div>
                 
-      Household income is less than or equal to twice the federal poverty level when higher ed enrollment 
-      rate is less than 20% in order to exclude areas with college and graduate students
+      Household income is less than or equal to twice the federal poverty level 
     
               </div>
             </div>
@@ -719,7 +714,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the AreaDetail checks if indicators for NATION is present
             <div>
               Proximity to hazardous waste facilities
               <div>
-                Count of hazardous waste facilities within 5 km
+                Count of hazardous waste facilities within 5 kilometers
               </div>
             </div>
             <div>
@@ -737,7 +732,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the AreaDetail checks if indicators for NATION is present
             <div>
               Proximity to NPL sites
               <div>
-                Proposed or listed NPL (Superfund) sites within 5 km
+                Proposed or listed NPL (Superfund) sites within 5 kilometers
               </div>
             </div>
             <div>
@@ -755,7 +750,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the AreaDetail checks if indicators for NATION is present
             <div>
               Proximity to RMP facilities
               <div>
-                Risk Management Plan facilities within 5 km
+                Risk Management Plan facilities within 5 kilometers
               </div>
             </div>
             <div>
@@ -774,8 +769,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the AreaDetail checks if indicators for NATION is present
               Low income
               <div>
                 
-      Household income is less than or equal to twice the federal poverty level when higher ed enrollment 
-      rate is less than 20% in order to exclude areas with college and graduate students
+      Household income is less than or equal to twice the federal poverty level 
     
               </div>
             </div>
@@ -850,8 +844,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the AreaDetail checks if indicators for NATION is present
               Low income
               <div>
                 
-      Household income is less than or equal to twice the federal poverty level when higher ed enrollment 
-      rate is less than 20% in order to exclude areas with college and graduate students
+      Household income is less than or equal to twice the federal poverty level 
     
               </div>
             </div>
@@ -966,7 +959,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the AreaDetail checks if indicators for NATION is present
             <div>
               Low life expectancy
               <div>
-                Average number of years of life a person can expect to live
+                Average number of years a person can expect to live
               </div>
             </div>
             <div>
@@ -985,8 +978,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the AreaDetail checks if indicators for NATION is present
               Low income
               <div>
                 
-      Household income is less than or equal to twice the federal poverty level when higher ed enrollment 
-      rate is less than 20% in order to exclude areas with college and graduate students
+      Household income is less than or equal to twice the federal poverty level 
     
               </div>
             </div>
@@ -1035,24 +1027,6 @@ exports[`rendering of the AreaDetail checks if indicators for NATION is present
             Percentile (0-100)
           </div>
         </div>
-        <li
-          data-cy="indicatorBox"
-        >
-          <div>
-            <div>
-              Low median income
-              <div>
-                Median income calculated as a percent of the area’s median income
-              </div>
-            </div>
-            <div>
-              N/A
-              <sup>
-                <span />
-              </sup>
-            </div>
-          </div>
-        </li>
         <li
           data-cy="indicatorBox"
         >
@@ -1075,6 +1049,24 @@ exports[`rendering of the AreaDetail checks if indicators for NATION is present
             </div>
           </div>
         </li>
+        <li
+          data-cy="indicatorBox"
+        >
+          <div>
+            <div>
+              Low median income
+              <div>
+                Median income calculated as a percent of the area’s median income
+              </div>
+            </div>
+            <div>
+              N/A
+              <sup>
+                <span />
+              </sup>
+            </div>
+          </div>
+        </li>
         <li
           data-cy="indicatorBox"
         >
@@ -1103,8 +1095,8 @@ exports[`rendering of the AreaDetail checks if indicators for NATION is present
               Poverty
               <div>
                 
-      Percent of a tract's population in households where the household income is at or below 
-      100% of the federal poverty level    
+      Percent of a tract's population in households where the household income is at or below 100% of 
+      the Federal poverty level   
     
               </div>
             </div>
@@ -1123,11 +1115,10 @@ exports[`rendering of the AreaDetail checks if indicators for NATION is present
         >
           <div>
             <div>
-              High school degree achievement rate
+              High school degree attainment rate
               <div>
                 
-      Percent of people ages 25 years or older whose education level is less than a high school diploma 
-      when higher ed enrollment rate is less than 20% in order to exclude areas with college and graduate students
+      Poportion of people ages 25 years or older whose education level is less than a high school diploma 
     
               </div>
             </div>
@@ -1256,24 +1247,6 @@ exports[`rendering of the AreaDetail checks if indicators for PUERTO RICO are pr
             Percentile (0-100)
           </div>
         </div>
-        <li
-          data-cy="indicatorBox"
-        >
-          <div>
-            <div>
-              Low median income
-              <div>
-                Median income calculated as a percent of the area’s median income
-              </div>
-            </div>
-            <div>
-              N/A
-              <sup>
-                <span />
-              </sup>
-            </div>
-          </div>
-        </li>
         <li
           data-cy="indicatorBox"
         >
@@ -1296,6 +1269,24 @@ exports[`rendering of the AreaDetail checks if indicators for PUERTO RICO are pr
             </div>
           </div>
         </li>
+        <li
+          data-cy="indicatorBox"
+        >
+          <div>
+            <div>
+              Low median income
+              <div>
+                Median income calculated as a percent of the area’s median income
+              </div>
+            </div>
+            <div>
+              N/A
+              <sup>
+                <span />
+              </sup>
+            </div>
+          </div>
+        </li>
         <li
           data-cy="indicatorBox"
         >
@@ -1324,8 +1315,8 @@ exports[`rendering of the AreaDetail checks if indicators for PUERTO RICO are pr
               Poverty
               <div>
                 
-      Percent of a tract's population in households where the household income is at or below 
-      100% of the federal poverty level    
+      Percent of a tract's population in households where the household income is at or below 100% of 
+      the Federal poverty level   
     
               </div>
             </div>
@@ -1344,11 +1335,10 @@ exports[`rendering of the AreaDetail checks if indicators for PUERTO RICO are pr
         >
           <div>
             <div>
-              High school degree achievement rate
+              High school degree attainment rate
               <div>
                 
-      Percent of people ages 25 years or older whose education level is less than a high school diploma 
-      when higher ed enrollment rate is less than 20% in order to exclude areas with college and graduate students
+      Poportion of people ages 25 years or older whose education level is less than a high school diploma 
     
               </div>
             </div>
diff --git a/client/src/components/Categories/__snapshots__/Categories.test.tsx.snap b/client/src/components/Categories/__snapshots__/Categories.test.tsx.snap
index b74efcae..23793fcd 100644
--- a/client/src/components/Categories/__snapshots__/Categories.test.tsx.snap
+++ b/client/src/components/Categories/__snapshots__/Categories.test.tsx.snap
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the Categories checks if component renders 1`] = `
         <strong>
           identified as disadvantaged
         </strong>
-         in this category 
+         
     
       </p>
       <p>
@@ -70,19 +70,19 @@ exports[`rendering of the Categories checks if component renders 1`] = `
         <strong>
           AND
         </strong>
-         is at or above 65th percentile for 
+         is above 65th percentile for 
         <a
           href="#low-income"
         >
           low income
         </a>
-         WHEN 
+         AND at or below 20% for 
         <a
           href="#high-ed-enroll-rate"
         >
           higher ed enrollment rate
         </a>
-         is at or below 20%
+         
     
       </p>
       <p />
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the Categories checks if component renders 1`] = `
         <strong>
           identified as disadvantaged
         </strong>
-         in this category 
+         
     
       </p>
       <p>
@@ -110,9 +110,9 @@ exports[`rendering of the Categories checks if component renders 1`] = `
         <a
           href="#energy-burden"
         >
-          energy cost burden
+          energy burden
         </a>
-         score OR 
+         OR 
         <a
           href="#pm-25"
         >
@@ -127,19 +127,19 @@ exports[`rendering of the Categories checks if component renders 1`] = `
         <strong>
           AND
         </strong>
-         is at or above 65th percentile for 
+         is above 65th percentile for 
         <a
           href="#low-income"
         >
           low income
         </a>
-         WHEN 
+         AND at or below 20% for 
         <a
           href="#high-ed-enroll-rate"
         >
           higher ed enrollment rate
         </a>
-         is at or below 20%
+         
     
       </p>
       <p />
@@ -154,7 +154,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the Categories checks if component renders 1`] = `
         <strong>
           identified as disadvantaged
         </strong>
-         in this category 
+         
     
       </p>
       <p>
@@ -184,19 +184,19 @@ exports[`rendering of the Categories checks if component renders 1`] = `
         <strong>
           AND
         </strong>
-         is at or above 65th percentile for 
+         is above 65th percentile for 
         <a
           href="#low-income"
         >
           low income
         </a>
-         WHEN 
+         AND at or below 20% for 
         <a
           href="#high-ed-enroll-rate"
         >
           higher ed enrollment rate
         </a>
-         is at or below 20%
+         
     
       </p>
       <p />
@@ -211,7 +211,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the Categories checks if component renders 1`] = `
         <strong>
           identified as disadvantaged
         </strong>
-         in this category 
+         
     
       </p>
       <p>
@@ -226,7 +226,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the Categories checks if component renders 1`] = `
         >
           lead paint
         </a>
-         WHEN 
+         AND 
         <a
           href="#median-home"
         >
@@ -248,19 +248,19 @@ exports[`rendering of the Categories checks if component renders 1`] = `
         <strong>
           AND
         </strong>
-         is at or above 65th percentile for 
+         is above 65th percentile for 
         <a
           href="#low-income"
         >
           low income
         </a>
-         WHEN 
+         AND at or below 20% for 
         <a
           href="#high-ed-enroll-rate"
         >
           higher ed enrollment rate
         </a>
-         is at or below 20%
+         
     
       </p>
       <p />
@@ -275,7 +275,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the Categories checks if component renders 1`] = `
         <strong>
           identified as disadvantaged
         </strong>
-         in this category 
+         
     
       </p>
       <p>
@@ -311,19 +311,19 @@ exports[`rendering of the Categories checks if component renders 1`] = `
         <strong>
           AND
         </strong>
-         is at or above 65th percentile for 
+         is above 65th percentile for 
         <a
           href="#low-income"
         >
           low income
         </a>
-         WHEN 
+         AND at or below 20% for 
         <a
           href="#high-ed-enroll-rate"
         >
           higher ed enrollment rate
         </a>
-         is at or below 20%
+         
     
       </p>
       <p />
@@ -338,7 +338,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the Categories checks if component renders 1`] = `
         <strong>
           identified as disadvantaged
         </strong>
-         in this category 
+         
     
       </p>
       <p>
@@ -362,19 +362,19 @@ exports[`rendering of the Categories checks if component renders 1`] = `
         <strong>
           AND
         </strong>
-         is at or above 65th percentile for 
+         is above 65th percentile for 
         <a
           href="#low-income"
         >
           low income
         </a>
-         WHEN 
+         AND at or below 20% for 
         <a
           href="#high-ed-enroll-rate"
         >
           higher ed enrollment rate
         </a>
-         is at or below 20%
+         
     
       </p>
       <p />
@@ -389,7 +389,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the Categories checks if component renders 1`] = `
         <strong>
           identified as disadvantaged
         </strong>
-         in this category 
+         
     
       </p>
       <p>
@@ -431,19 +431,19 @@ exports[`rendering of the Categories checks if component renders 1`] = `
         <strong>
           AND
         </strong>
-         is at or above 65th percentile for 
+         is above 65th percentile for 
         <a
           href="#low-income"
         >
           low income
         </a>
-         WHEN 
+         AND at or below 20% for 
         <a
           href="#high-ed-enroll-rate"
         >
           higher ed enrollment rate
         </a>
-         is at or below 20%
+         
     
       </p>
       <p />
@@ -458,7 +458,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the Categories checks if component renders 1`] = `
         <strong>
           identified as disadvantaged
         </strong>
-         in this category 
+         
     
       </p>
       <p>
@@ -503,20 +503,20 @@ exports[`rendering of the Categories checks if component renders 1`] = `
         <strong>
           AND
         </strong>
-         where the 
+         is at or less than 90% for 
         <a
           href="#high-school"
         >
-          high school degree achievement rates
+          high school degree attainment rate
         </a>
-         rates for adults 25 years and older is at or less than 
-    90% WHEN 
+         for adults 25 years and older AND 
+    at or below 20% for 
         <a
           href="#high-ed-enroll-rate"
         >
           higher ed enrollment rate
         </a>
-         is at or below 20%
+         
   
       </p>
       <p />
diff --git a/client/src/components/CategoryCard/__snapshots__/CategoryCard.test.tsx.snap b/client/src/components/CategoryCard/__snapshots__/CategoryCard.test.tsx.snap
index b56387b0..b12f358b 100644
--- a/client/src/components/CategoryCard/__snapshots__/CategoryCard.test.tsx.snap
+++ b/client/src/components/CategoryCard/__snapshots__/CategoryCard.test.tsx.snap
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the CategoryCard checks if component renders 1`] = `
       <strong>
         identified as disadvantaged
       </strong>
-       in this category 
+       
     
     </p>
     <p>
@@ -48,19 +48,19 @@ exports[`rendering of the CategoryCard checks if component renders 1`] = `
       <strong>
         AND
       </strong>
-       is at or above 65th percentile for 
+       is above 65th percentile for 
       <a
         href="#low-income"
       >
         low income
       </a>
-       WHEN 
+       AND at or below 20% for 
       <a
         href="#high-ed-enroll-rate"
       >
         higher ed enrollment rate
       </a>
-       is at or below 20%
+       
     
     </p>
     <p />
diff --git a/client/src/components/DatasetContainer/tests/__snapshots__/datasetContainer.test.tsx.snap b/client/src/components/DatasetContainer/tests/__snapshots__/datasetContainer.test.tsx.snap
index 41c5b95e..e502f53f 100644
--- a/client/src/components/DatasetContainer/tests/__snapshots__/datasetContainer.test.tsx.snap
+++ b/client/src/components/DatasetContainer/tests/__snapshots__/datasetContainer.test.tsx.snap
@@ -307,7 +307,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
               id="energy-burden"
             >
               <h3>
-                Energy cost burden
+                Energy burden
               </h3>
               <div>
                 Average annual energy cost per household ($) divided by household average income.
@@ -988,7 +988,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
               id="life-exp"
             >
               <h3>
-                Life expectancy
+                Low life expectancy
               </h3>
               <div>
                 
@@ -999,12 +999,12 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
                     Note:
                   </strong>
                   
-          Unlike most of the other datasets, high values of this data indicate low burdens.
-          For percentile calculations of burden, the percentile is calculated in reverse order, so that the tract with
-          the highest median income relative to area median income (lowest burden on this measure) is at the
-          0th percentile, and the tract with the lowest median income relative to area median income
-          (highest burden on this measure) is at the 100th percentile. Tracts with the highest number 
-          have the lowest life expectancy.
+          Unlike most of the other datasets, high values of this data indicate low burdens. For 
+          percentile calculations of burden, the percentile is calculated in reverse order, so that the 
+          tract with the highest life expectancy relative to area life expectancy (lowest burden on this 
+          measure) is at the 0th percentile, and the tract with the lowest life expectancy relative to 
+          area life expectancy (highest burden on this measure) is at the 100th percentile. Tracts with 
+          the highest number have the lowest life expectancy.
         
                 </p>
                 
@@ -1050,11 +1050,26 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
               id="low-med-inc"
             >
               <h3>
-                Median Income
+                Low median income
               </h3>
               <div>
                 
         Median income of the census tract calculated as a percent of the area’s median income.
+        
+                <p>
+                  <strong>
+                    Note:
+                  </strong>
+                  
+          Unlike most of the other datasets, high values of this data indicate low burdens. For 
+          percentile calculations of burden, the percentile is calculated in reverse order, so that the 
+          tract with the highest median income relative to area median income (lowest burden on this 
+          measure) is at the 0th percentile, and the tract with the lowest median income relative to 
+          area median income (highest burden on this measure) is at the 100th percentile. Tracts with 
+          the highest number have the lowest median income.
+        
+                </p>
+                
       
               </div>
               <ul>
@@ -1302,7 +1317,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
               id="high-school"
             >
               <h3>
-                High school degree achievement rate
+                High school degree attainment rate
               </h3>
               <div>
                 
diff --git a/client/src/components/HowYouCanHelp/tests/__snapshots__/howYouCanHelp.test.tsx.snap b/client/src/components/HowYouCanHelp/tests/__snapshots__/howYouCanHelp.test.tsx.snap
index cedf361a..cdfc057d 100644
--- a/client/src/components/HowYouCanHelp/tests/__snapshots__/howYouCanHelp.test.tsx.snap
+++ b/client/src/components/HowYouCanHelp/tests/__snapshots__/howYouCanHelp.test.tsx.snap
@@ -30,17 +30,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the HowYouCanHelp checks if various text fields are visibl
         .
       </li>
       <li>
-        Respond to our request for information on 
-        <a
-          class="usa-link usa-link--external"
-          data-cy=""
-          href="https://www.federalregister.gov/"
-          rel="noreferrer"
-          target="_blank"
-        >
-          federalregister.gov
-        </a>
-        .
+        CEQ will publish a request for information on federalregister.gov.
       </li>
     </ul>
   </div>
diff --git a/client/src/components/MethodologyFormula/__snapshots__/MethodologyFormula.test.tsx.snap b/client/src/components/MethodologyFormula/__snapshots__/MethodologyFormula.test.tsx.snap
index 1098ec80..e62e9033 100644
--- a/client/src/components/MethodologyFormula/__snapshots__/MethodologyFormula.test.tsx.snap
+++ b/client/src/components/MethodologyFormula/__snapshots__/MethodologyFormula.test.tsx.snap
@@ -18,7 +18,8 @@ exports[`rendering of the MethodologyFormula checks if component renders 1`] = `
       <span>
         IF
       </span>
-       the tract is above the thresholds for a set of environmental, climate or socioeconomic related indicators
+       the tract is above the thresholds for one or more environmental, climate, health or 
+      socioeconomic burden indicators
       
     </p>
     <p>
@@ -27,7 +28,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the MethodologyFormula checks if component renders 1`] = `
       <span>
         AND
       </span>
-       the tract is above the thresholds for another set of income or education related indicators
+       the tract is above the thresholds for both socioeconomic indicators
     
     </p>
   </section>
diff --git a/client/src/data/constants.tsx b/client/src/data/constants.tsx
index 8fc896f8..e8cfd785 100644
--- a/client/src/data/constants.tsx
+++ b/client/src/data/constants.tsx
@@ -76,6 +76,7 @@ export const POVERTY_BELOW_200_PERCENTILE = 'P200_PFS';
 export const PROXIMITY_NPL_SITES_PERCENTILE = 'NPL_PFS';
 export const PROXIMITY_RMP_SITES_PERCENTILE = 'RMP_PFS';
 export const PROXIMITY_TSDF_SITES_PERCENTILE = 'TSDF_PFS';
+export const HIGHER_ED_PERCENTILE = 'XXXXX';
 
 export const ISLAND_AREAS_UNEMPLOYMENT_LOW_HS_EDU_PERCENTILE_FIELD= 'IAULHSE_PFS';
 export const ISLAND_AREAS_POVERTY_LOW_HS_EDU_PERCENTILE_FIELD= 'IAPLHSE_PFS';
@@ -120,6 +121,7 @@ export const IS_GTE_90_BELOW_100_POVERTY_AND_LOW_HIGH_SCHOOL_EDU = 'PLHSE';
 export const IS_GTE_90_LOW_MEDIAN_INCOME_AND_LOW_HIGH_SCHOOL_EDU = 'LMILHSE';
 export const IS_GTE_90_UNEMPLOYMENT_AND_LOW_HIGH_SCHOOL_EDU = 'ULHSE';
 export const IS_FEDERAL_POVERTY_LEVEL_200 = 'FPL200S';
+export const IS_HIGHER_ED_PERCENTILE = 'XXXXXXX';
 export const TOTAL_THRESHOLD_CRITERIA = 'TC';
 export const IS_GTE_90_ISLAND_AREA_UNEMPLOYMENT_AND_IS_LOW_HS_EDU_2009 = 'IAULHSE';
 export const IS_GTE_90_ISLAND_AREA_BELOW_100_POVERTY_AND_IS_LOW_HS_EDU_2009 = 'IAPLHSE';
diff --git a/client/src/data/copy/about.tsx b/client/src/data/copy/about.tsx
index 15b0d8f9..e391493a 100644
--- a/client/src/data/copy/about.tsx
+++ b/client/src/data/copy/about.tsx
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ export const HEADING_1 = {
     to create a Climate and Economic Justice Screening Tool. The purpose of the tool is to help
     Federal agencies identify disadvantaged communities that are marginalized, underserved, and 
     overburdened by pollution. The current version of the tool provides socioeconomic, environmental, 
-    and climate information to inform decisions that may affect these communities. The 
+    health and climate information to inform decisions that may affect these communities. The 
     tool identifies disadvantaged communities through publicly-available, nationally-consistent datasets.
     `}
     values={{
diff --git a/client/src/data/copy/explore.tsx b/client/src/data/copy/explore.tsx
index 6dfc515d..fbb20114 100644
--- a/client/src/data/copy/explore.tsx
+++ b/client/src/data/copy/explore.tsx
@@ -326,9 +326,14 @@ export const SIDE_PANEL_INDICATORS = defineMessages({
     defaultMessage: 'Low income',
     description: 'low income',
   },
+  HIGH_ED: {
+    id: 'areaDetail.indicator.high.ed',
+    defaultMessage: 'Higher ed enrollment rate',
+    description: 'Higher ed degree achievement rate',
+  },
   ENERGY_BURDEN: {
     id: 'areaDetail.indicator.energyBurden',
-    defaultMessage: 'Energy cost burden',
+    defaultMessage: 'Energy burden',
     description: 'Average annual energy cost ($) divided by household income',
   },
   PM_2_5: {
@@ -428,9 +433,8 @@ export const SIDE_PANEL_INDICATORS = defineMessages({
   },
   HIGH_SCL: {
     id: 'areaDetail.indicator.high.school',
-    defaultMessage: 'High school degree achievement rate',
+    defaultMessage: 'High school degree attainment rate',
     description: 'High school degree achievement rate',
-
   },
 });
 
@@ -449,19 +453,24 @@ export const SIDE_PANEL_INDICATOR_DESCRIPTION = defineMessages({
   EXP_POP_LOSS: {
     id: 'areaDetail.indicator.description.exp.pop.loss',
     defaultMessage: `
-      Rate relative to the population in fatalities and injuries resulting from natural hazards each year
+      Rate of fatalities and injuries resulting from natural hazards each year
     `,
     description: 'Economic loss rate to the population in fatalities and injuries resulting from natural hazards',
   },
   LOW_INCOME: {
     id: 'areaDetail.indicator.description.low.income',
     defaultMessage: `
-      Household income is less than or equal to twice the federal poverty level when higher ed enrollment 
-      rate is less than 20% in order to exclude areas with college and graduate students
+      Household income is less than or equal to twice the federal poverty level 
     `,
     description: 'Household income is less than or equal to twice the federal poverty level',
   },
-
+  HIGH_ED: {
+    id: 'areaDetail.indicator.description.high.ed',
+    defaultMessage: `
+    Percent of population enrolled in college, university, or graduate school 
+    `,
+    description: 'Percent of people ages 25 years or older whose education level is less than a high school diploma',
+  },
   ENERGY_BURDEN: {
     id: 'areaDetail.indicator.description.energyBurden',
     defaultMessage: 'Average annual energy costs divided by household income',
@@ -487,7 +496,7 @@ export const SIDE_PANEL_INDICATOR_DESCRIPTION = defineMessages({
   LEAD_PAINT: {
     id: 'areaDetail.indicator.description.leadPaint',
     defaultMessage: `
-      Percent of pre-1960 housing when median home value at or below 90th percentile
+      Percentile of number of homes built before 1960 that are not among the most expensive
     `,
     description: 'Pre-1960 housing',
   },
@@ -505,18 +514,18 @@ export const SIDE_PANEL_INDICATOR_DESCRIPTION = defineMessages({
 
   PROX_HAZ: {
     id: 'areaDetail.indicator.description.prox.haz',
-    defaultMessage: 'Count of hazardous waste facilities within 5 km',
-    description: 'Count of hazardous waste facilities within 5 km',
+    defaultMessage: 'Count of hazardous waste facilities within 5 kilometers',
+    description: 'Count of hazardous waste facilities within 5 kilometers',
   },
   PROX_NPL: {
     id: 'areaDetail.indicator.description.prox.npl',
-    defaultMessage: 'Proposed or listed NPL (Superfund) sites within 5 km',
-    description: 'Proposed or listed NPL (Superfund) sites within 5 km',
+    defaultMessage: 'Proposed or listed NPL (Superfund) sites within 5 kilometers',
+    description: 'Proposed or listed NPL (Superfund) sites within 5 kilometers',
   },
   PROX_RMP: {
     id: 'areaDetail.indicator.description.prox.npl',
-    defaultMessage: 'Risk Management Plan facilities within 5 km',
-    description: 'Risk Management Plan facilities within 5 km',
+    defaultMessage: 'Risk Management Plan facilities within 5 kilometers',
+    description: 'Risk Management Plan facilities within 5 kilometers',
   },
 
   WASTE_WATER: {
@@ -547,7 +556,7 @@ export const SIDE_PANEL_INDICATOR_DESCRIPTION = defineMessages({
   },
   LOW_LIFE_EXPECT: {
     id: 'areaDetail.indicator.description.lifeExpect',
-    defaultMessage: 'Average number of years of life a person can expect to live',
+    defaultMessage: 'Average number of years a person can expect to live',
     description: 'Average number of years of life a person can expect to live',
   },
 
@@ -572,8 +581,8 @@ export const SIDE_PANEL_INDICATOR_DESCRIPTION = defineMessages({
   POVERTY: {
     id: 'areaDetail.indicator.description.poverty',
     defaultMessage: `
-      Percent of a tract's population in households where the household income is at or below 
-      100% of the federal poverty level    
+      Percent of a tract's population in households where the household income is at or below 100% of 
+      the Federal poverty level   
     `,
     description: `Percent of individuals in households where the household income is at or 
     below 100% of the federal poverty level`,
@@ -581,8 +590,7 @@ export const SIDE_PANEL_INDICATOR_DESCRIPTION = defineMessages({
   HIGH_SKL: {
     id: 'areaDetail.indicator.description.high.school',
     defaultMessage: `
-      Percent of people ages 25 years or older whose education level is less than a high school diploma 
-      when higher ed enrollment rate is less than 20% in order to exclude areas with college and graduate students
+      Poportion of people ages 25 years or older whose education level is less than a high school diploma 
     `,
     description: 'Percent of people ages 25 years or older whose education level is less than a high school diploma',
   },
@@ -593,8 +601,8 @@ export const DOWNLOAD_DRAFT = {
     id={'download.draft.ptag.1'}
     description={'Download the current list of communities and datasets used.'}
     defaultMessage={`
-    {downloadDraft} of communities and datasets used (ZIP file will contain one .xlsx, 
-    one .csv, and one .pdf, with a size of {downloadFileSize}). Last updated: {dateUpdated}.
+    {downloadDraft} of communities and datasets used (ZIP file will contain one .xlsx 
+    and one .csv, with a size of {downloadFileSize}). Last updated: {dateUpdated}.
     `}
     values={{
       downloadDraft:
@@ -754,7 +762,7 @@ export const HOW_YOU_CAN_HELP_LIST_ITEMS = {
   LIST_ITEM_3: <FormattedMessage
     id={'youCanHelpInfoText.list.item.3'}
     description={'share your feedback'}
-    defaultMessage={`Respond to our request for information on {federalRegisterLink}.`}
+    defaultMessage={`CEQ will publish a request for information on federalregister.gov.`}
     values={{
       federalRegisterLink:
       <LinkTypeWrapper
diff --git a/client/src/data/copy/methodology.tsx b/client/src/data/copy/methodology.tsx
index e69547d2..796f4f53 100644
--- a/client/src/data/copy/methodology.tsx
+++ b/client/src/data/copy/methodology.tsx
@@ -21,7 +21,8 @@ export const PAGE = defineMessages({
       the Justice40 Initiative using census tracts, which are the smallest geographic unit for 
       which publicly-available and nationally-consistent datasets can be consistently displayed on the 
       tool. Census tract geographical boundaries are determined by the U.S. Census Bureau once every ten 
-      years. This tool uses the census tract boundaries from 2010.
+      years. This tool utilizes the census tract boundaries from 2010 because they match the datasets used 
+      in the tool. The U.S. Census Bureau will update these tract boundaries in 2020.
     `,
     description: 'methodology page paragraph',
   },
@@ -52,7 +53,8 @@ export const FORMULA = {
   IF: <FormattedMessage
     id={'methodology.page.formula.first'}
     defaultMessage={ `
-      {if} the tract is above the thresholds for a set of environmental, climate or socioeconomic related indicators
+      {if} the tract is above the thresholds for one or more environmental, climate, health or 
+      socioeconomic burden indicators
       `}
     description={'the first part of the formula used in the methodology'}
     values= {{
@@ -62,7 +64,7 @@ export const FORMULA = {
   AND: <FormattedMessage
     id={'methodology.page.formula.second'}
     defaultMessage={ `
-      {and} the tract is above the thresholds for another set of income or education related indicators
+      {and} the tract is above the thresholds for both socioeconomic indicators
     `}
     description={'the second part of the formula used in the methodology'}
     values= {{
@@ -80,9 +82,9 @@ export const FORMULA = {
 };
 
 // Download Package
-export const DOWNLOAD_FILE_SIZE = '73MB';
-export const DOWNLOAD_LAST_UPDATED = '12/13/21';
-export const DOWNLOAD_LAST_UPDATED_ES = '13/12/21';
+export const DOWNLOAD_FILE_SIZE = '111MB';
+export const DOWNLOAD_LAST_UPDATED = '2/18/22';
+export const DOWNLOAD_LAST_UPDATED_ES = '18/2/22';
 export const VERSION_NUMBER = '0.1';
 
 export const DOWNLOAD_ZIP_URL = [
@@ -105,7 +107,7 @@ export const DOWNLOAD_PACKAGE = {
     id={ 'downloadPacket.info.text'}
     defaultMessage= {`
       The download package includes draft v{versionNumber} of the list of disadvantaged communities
-      (.csv and .xlsx) and information (.pdf) about how to use the list.
+      (.csv and .xlsx).
     `}
     description= {'download packet info text'}
     values= {{
@@ -154,7 +156,7 @@ export const CATEGORY= {
   ID_AS_DISADV_TEXT: <FormattedMessage
     id={'methodology.category.card.title'}
     defaultMessage={`
-      Communities are {idAsDisadv} in this category 
+      Communities are {idAsDisadv} 
     `}
     description= {'category heading'}
     values={{
@@ -168,7 +170,7 @@ export const CATEGORY_AND_CLAUSE = {
   LOW_INC_65_WHEN_HIGH_ED_LTE_20: <FormattedMessage
     id= {'methodology.paage.category.and.clause.low.inc.hs.ed'}
     defaultMessage={`
-      {and} is at or above 65th percentile for {lowIncome} WHEN {highEdEnrollRate} is at or below 20%
+      {and} is above 65th percentile for {lowIncome} AND at or below 20% for {highEdEnrollRate} 
     `}
     description= {'and portion of the formula dealing with lower income and high school degree rate'}
     values= {{
@@ -180,13 +182,13 @@ export const CATEGORY_AND_CLAUSE = {
   HS_DEG_90_WHEN_HIGH_ED_LTE_20: <FormattedMessage
     id= {'methodology.paage.category.and.clause.hs.ed.higher.ed'}
     defaultMessage= {`
-    {and} where the {highSchoolRate} rates for adults 25 years and older is at or less than 
-    90% WHEN {highEdEnrollRate} is at or below 20%
+    {and} is at or less than 90% for {highSchoolRate} for adults 25 years and older AND 
+    at or below 20% for {highEdEnrollRate} 
   `}
     description= {'and portion of the formula dealing with higher ed enrollment and high school degree rate'}
     values= {{
       and: <strong>AND</strong>,
-      highSchoolRate: <a href="#high-school">high school degree achievement rates</a>,
+      highSchoolRate: <a href="#high-school">high school degree attainment rate</a>,
       highEdEnrollRate: <a href="#high-ed-enroll-rate">higher ed enrollment rate</a>,
     }}
   />,
@@ -253,12 +255,12 @@ export const CATEGORIES = {
     IF: <FormattedMessage
       id= {'indicator.categories.clean.energy.if'}
       defaultMessage= {`
-        {if} at or above 90th percentile for {energyCostBur} score OR {pm25}
+        {if} at or above 90th percentile for {energyCostBur} OR {pm25}
       `}
       description= {'if portion of the formula'}
       values= {{
         if: <strong>IF</strong>,
-        energyCostBur: <a href='#energy-burden'>energy cost burden</a>,
+        energyCostBur: <a href='#energy-burden'>energy burden</a>,
         pm25: <a href='#pm-25'>PM2.5 in the air</a>,
       }}
     />,
@@ -321,7 +323,7 @@ export const CATEGORIES = {
     IF: <FormattedMessage
       id= {'indicator.categories.afford.house.if'}
       defaultMessage= {`
-        {if} at or above 90th percentile for {lead} WHEN {medianHomeVal} is at or less than
+        {if} at or above 90th percentile for {lead} AND {medianHomeVal} is at or less than
         90th percentile OR at or above the 90th percentile for the {houseBur}
       `}
       description= {'if portion of the formula'}
@@ -923,7 +925,7 @@ export const INDICATORS = [
   },
   {
     domID: 'energy-burden',
-    indicator: 'Energy cost burden',
+    indicator: 'Energy burden',
     description: <FormattedMessage
       id= {'category.energy.burden.description.text'}
       defaultMessage= {`Average annual energy cost per household ($) divided by household average income.`}
@@ -1204,7 +1206,7 @@ export const INDICATORS = [
   },
   {
     domID: 'life-exp',
-    indicator: 'Life expectancy',
+    indicator: 'Low life expectancy',
     description: <FormattedMessage
       id= {'category.low.life.expectancy.description.text'}
       defaultMessage= {`
@@ -1214,12 +1216,12 @@ export const INDICATORS = [
       description= {'description text for low life expectancy'}
       values= {{
         note: <p><strong>Note:</strong>{`
-          Unlike most of the other datasets, high values of this data indicate low burdens.
-          For percentile calculations of burden, the percentile is calculated in reverse order, so that the tract with
-          the highest median income relative to area median income (lowest burden on this measure) is at the
-          0th percentile, and the tract with the lowest median income relative to area median income
-          (highest burden on this measure) is at the 100th percentile. Tracts with the highest number 
-          have the lowest life expectancy.
+          Unlike most of the other datasets, high values of this data indicate low burdens. For 
+          percentile calculations of burden, the percentile is calculated in reverse order, so that the 
+          tract with the highest life expectancy relative to area life expectancy (lowest burden on this 
+          measure) is at the 0th percentile, and the tract with the lowest life expectancy relative to 
+          area life expectancy (highest burden on this measure) is at the 100th percentile. Tracts with 
+          the highest number have the lowest life expectancy.
         `}</p>,
       }}
     />,
@@ -1234,13 +1236,24 @@ export const INDICATORS = [
   },
   {
     domID: 'low-med-inc',
-    indicator: 'Median Income',
+    indicator: 'Low median income',
     description: <FormattedMessage
       id= {'category.workforce.dev.description.text'}
       defaultMessage= {`
         Median income of the census tract calculated as a percent of the area’s median income.
+        {note}
       `}
       description= {'description text for workforce dev'}
+      values= {{
+        note: <p><strong>Note:</strong>{`
+          Unlike most of the other datasets, high values of this data indicate low burdens. For 
+          percentile calculations of burden, the percentile is calculated in reverse order, so that the 
+          tract with the highest median income relative to area median income (lowest burden on this 
+          measure) is at the 0th percentile, and the tract with the lowest median income relative to 
+          area median income (highest burden on this measure) is at the 100th percentile. Tracts with 
+          the highest number have the lowest median income.
+        `}</p>,
+      }}
     />,
     usedIn: CATEGORIES.WORKFORCE_DEV.METHODOLOGY,
     responsibleParty: RESPONSIBLE_PARTIES.CENSUS,
@@ -1323,7 +1336,7 @@ export const INDICATORS = [
   },
   {
     domID: 'high-school',
-    indicator: 'High school degree achievement rate',
+    indicator: 'High school degree attainment rate',
     description: <FormattedMessage
       id= {'category.highschool.description.text'}
       defaultMessage= {`
diff --git a/client/src/pages/__snapshots__/index.test.tsx.snap b/client/src/pages/__snapshots__/index.test.tsx.snap
index cb7dfd74..05c6eea0 100644
--- a/client/src/pages/__snapshots__/index.test.tsx.snap
+++ b/client/src/pages/__snapshots__/index.test.tsx.snap
@@ -335,7 +335,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
     to create a Climate and Economic Justice Screening Tool. The purpose of the tool is to help
     Federal agencies identify disadvantaged communities that are marginalized, underserved, and 
     overburdened by pollution. The current version of the tool provides socioeconomic, environmental, 
-    and climate information to inform decisions that may affect these communities. The 
+    health and climate information to inform decisions that may affect these communities. The 
     tool identifies disadvantaged communities through publicly-available, nationally-consistent datasets.
     
                 </p>
diff --git a/client/src/pages/__snapshots__/methodology.test.tsx.snap b/client/src/pages/__snapshots__/methodology.test.tsx.snap
index b0108846..966f50aa 100644
--- a/client/src/pages/__snapshots__/methodology.test.tsx.snap
+++ b/client/src/pages/__snapshots__/methodology.test.tsx.snap
@@ -294,7 +294,8 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
       the Justice40 Initiative using census tracts, which are the smallest geographic unit for 
       which publicly-available and nationally-consistent datasets can be consistently displayed on the 
       tool. Census tract geographical boundaries are determined by the U.S. Census Bureau once every ten 
-      years. This tool uses the census tract boundaries from 2010.
+      years. This tool utilizes the census tract boundaries from 2010 because they match the datasets used 
+      in the tool. The U.S. Census Bureau will update these tract boundaries in 2020.
     
             </p>
           </section>
@@ -314,7 +315,8 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
               <span>
                 IF
               </span>
-               the tract is above the thresholds for a set of environmental, climate or socioeconomic related indicators
+               the tract is above the thresholds for one or more environmental, climate, health or 
+      socioeconomic burden indicators
       
             </p>
             <p>
@@ -323,7 +325,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
               <span>
                 AND
               </span>
-               the tract is above the thresholds for another set of income or education related indicators
+               the tract is above the thresholds for both socioeconomic indicators
     
             </p>
           </section>
@@ -349,15 +351,15 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
               <div>
                 <div>
                   <div>
-                    Draft communities list v0.1 (73MB)
+                    Draft communities list v0.1 (111MB)
                   </div>
                   <div>
                     
       The download package includes draft v0.1 of the list of disadvantaged communities
-      (.csv and .xlsx) and information (.pdf) about how to use the list.
+      (.csv and .xlsx).
      
                     <span>
-                      Last updated: 12/13/21 
+                      Last updated: 2/18/22 
                     </span>
                   </div>
                   <div>
@@ -421,7 +423,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
           <strong>
             identified as disadvantaged
           </strong>
-           in this category 
+           
     
         </p>
         <p>
@@ -457,19 +459,19 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
           <strong>
             AND
           </strong>
-           is at or above 65th percentile for 
+           is above 65th percentile for 
           <a
             href="#low-income"
           >
             low income
           </a>
-           WHEN 
+           AND at or below 20% for 
           <a
             href="#high-ed-enroll-rate"
           >
             higher ed enrollment rate
           </a>
-           is at or below 20%
+           
     
         </p>
         <p />
@@ -484,7 +486,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
           <strong>
             identified as disadvantaged
           </strong>
-           in this category 
+           
     
         </p>
         <p>
@@ -497,9 +499,9 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
           <a
             href="#energy-burden"
           >
-            energy cost burden
+            energy burden
           </a>
-           score OR 
+           OR 
           <a
             href="#pm-25"
           >
@@ -514,19 +516,19 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
           <strong>
             AND
           </strong>
-           is at or above 65th percentile for 
+           is above 65th percentile for 
           <a
             href="#low-income"
           >
             low income
           </a>
-           WHEN 
+           AND at or below 20% for 
           <a
             href="#high-ed-enroll-rate"
           >
             higher ed enrollment rate
           </a>
-           is at or below 20%
+           
     
         </p>
         <p />
@@ -541,7 +543,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
           <strong>
             identified as disadvantaged
           </strong>
-           in this category 
+           
     
         </p>
         <p>
@@ -571,19 +573,19 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
           <strong>
             AND
           </strong>
-           is at or above 65th percentile for 
+           is above 65th percentile for 
           <a
             href="#low-income"
           >
             low income
           </a>
-           WHEN 
+           AND at or below 20% for 
           <a
             href="#high-ed-enroll-rate"
           >
             higher ed enrollment rate
           </a>
-           is at or below 20%
+           
     
         </p>
         <p />
@@ -598,7 +600,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
           <strong>
             identified as disadvantaged
           </strong>
-           in this category 
+           
     
         </p>
         <p>
@@ -613,7 +615,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
           >
             lead paint
           </a>
-           WHEN 
+           AND 
           <a
             href="#median-home"
           >
@@ -635,19 +637,19 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
           <strong>
             AND
           </strong>
-           is at or above 65th percentile for 
+           is above 65th percentile for 
           <a
             href="#low-income"
           >
             low income
           </a>
-           WHEN 
+           AND at or below 20% for 
           <a
             href="#high-ed-enroll-rate"
           >
             higher ed enrollment rate
           </a>
-           is at or below 20%
+           
     
         </p>
         <p />
@@ -662,7 +664,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
           <strong>
             identified as disadvantaged
           </strong>
-           in this category 
+           
     
         </p>
         <p>
@@ -698,19 +700,19 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
           <strong>
             AND
           </strong>
-           is at or above 65th percentile for 
+           is above 65th percentile for 
           <a
             href="#low-income"
           >
             low income
           </a>
-           WHEN 
+           AND at or below 20% for 
           <a
             href="#high-ed-enroll-rate"
           >
             higher ed enrollment rate
           </a>
-           is at or below 20%
+           
     
         </p>
         <p />
@@ -725,7 +727,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
           <strong>
             identified as disadvantaged
           </strong>
-           in this category 
+           
     
         </p>
         <p>
@@ -749,19 +751,19 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
           <strong>
             AND
           </strong>
-           is at or above 65th percentile for 
+           is above 65th percentile for 
           <a
             href="#low-income"
           >
             low income
           </a>
-           WHEN 
+           AND at or below 20% for 
           <a
             href="#high-ed-enroll-rate"
           >
             higher ed enrollment rate
           </a>
-           is at or below 20%
+           
     
         </p>
         <p />
@@ -776,7 +778,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
           <strong>
             identified as disadvantaged
           </strong>
-           in this category 
+           
     
         </p>
         <p>
@@ -818,19 +820,19 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
           <strong>
             AND
           </strong>
-           is at or above 65th percentile for 
+           is above 65th percentile for 
           <a
             href="#low-income"
           >
             low income
           </a>
-           WHEN 
+           AND at or below 20% for 
           <a
             href="#high-ed-enroll-rate"
           >
             higher ed enrollment rate
           </a>
-           is at or below 20%
+           
     
         </p>
         <p />
@@ -845,7 +847,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
           <strong>
             identified as disadvantaged
           </strong>
-           in this category 
+           
     
         </p>
         <p>
@@ -890,20 +892,20 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
           <strong>
             AND
           </strong>
-           where the 
+           is at or less than 90% for 
           <a
             href="#high-school"
           >
-            high school degree achievement rates
+            high school degree attainment rate
           </a>
-           rates for adults 25 years and older is at or less than 
-    90% WHEN 
+           for adults 25 years and older AND 
+    at or below 20% for 
           <a
             href="#high-ed-enroll-rate"
           >
             higher ed enrollment rate
           </a>
-           is at or below 20%
+           
   
         </p>
         <p />
@@ -1214,7 +1216,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
                 id="energy-burden"
               >
                 <h3>
-                  Energy cost burden
+                  Energy burden
                 </h3>
                 <div>
                   Average annual energy cost per household ($) divided by household average income.
@@ -1895,7 +1897,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
                 id="life-exp"
               >
                 <h3>
-                  Life expectancy
+                  Low life expectancy
                 </h3>
                 <div>
                   
@@ -1906,12 +1908,12 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
                       Note:
                     </strong>
                     
-          Unlike most of the other datasets, high values of this data indicate low burdens.
-          For percentile calculations of burden, the percentile is calculated in reverse order, so that the tract with
-          the highest median income relative to area median income (lowest burden on this measure) is at the
-          0th percentile, and the tract with the lowest median income relative to area median income
-          (highest burden on this measure) is at the 100th percentile. Tracts with the highest number 
-          have the lowest life expectancy.
+          Unlike most of the other datasets, high values of this data indicate low burdens. For 
+          percentile calculations of burden, the percentile is calculated in reverse order, so that the 
+          tract with the highest life expectancy relative to area life expectancy (lowest burden on this 
+          measure) is at the 0th percentile, and the tract with the lowest life expectancy relative to 
+          area life expectancy (highest burden on this measure) is at the 100th percentile. Tracts with 
+          the highest number have the lowest life expectancy.
         
                   </p>
                   
@@ -1957,11 +1959,26 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
                 id="low-med-inc"
               >
                 <h3>
-                  Median Income
+                  Low median income
                 </h3>
                 <div>
                   
         Median income of the census tract calculated as a percent of the area’s median income.
+        
+                  <p>
+                    <strong>
+                      Note:
+                    </strong>
+                    
+          Unlike most of the other datasets, high values of this data indicate low burdens. For 
+          percentile calculations of burden, the percentile is calculated in reverse order, so that the 
+          tract with the highest median income relative to area median income (lowest burden on this 
+          measure) is at the 0th percentile, and the tract with the lowest median income relative to 
+          area median income (highest burden on this measure) is at the 100th percentile. Tracts with 
+          the highest number have the lowest median income.
+        
+                  </p>
+                  
       
                 </div>
                 <ul>
@@ -2209,7 +2226,7 @@ exports[`rendering of the DatasetContainer checks if various text fields are vis
                 id="high-school"
               >
                 <h3>
-                  High school degree achievement rate
+                  High school degree attainment rate
                 </h3>
                 <div>